This post is a response to “Back to the Land,” an article which appeared in Orion Magazine https://orionmagazine.org/article/bac...
Chelsea Bandalillo takes the readers on a brief tour of the Texas State Forensic Anthropology Research Facility where forensic anthropologists research the decomposition process of cadavers, hoping to learn gems of information which will help them investigate crime scenes. Though I cannot place a specific reason for the thought, I got the impression that she was uncomfortable with the subject matter. Despite the assertion that she tries but cannot see the remains as human, she tours the facility with “eyes open and mouth mostly closed.”
The short form, in our time challenged, compressed world gives readers a snap shot view. Perhaps she chose the short form for that reason, or perhaps she senses potential discomfort for readers and chose the short form so that they will read through the text without putting it down.
The subject matter provides rich ground for a more in-depth treatment. Though I have not toured the Texas facility or the similar one operated by the University of Tennessee at Knoxville, I have taken the virtual tour of the Knoxville facility http://www.jeffersonbass.com/tour-the... . Dr. William Bass oversees the Knoxville “body farm” and teamed up with writer Jon Jefferson to produce ten volumes of mysteries known as the “Body Farm Series” under the pen name Jefferson Bass.
Fans of the Jefferson Bass series or the successful television series, CSI: Crime Scene Investigation, with its multiple spin-offs, would probably enjoy Bandilillo’s article more than literary readers. They might even read a more in-depth article. Though Bandiillo cannot bring herself to say the word cadaver in reference to the bodies which attract them, the paragraph on butterflies at the end is a nice touch. I would enjoy seeing the butterflies.
Written as an assignment for an online course on writing nonfiction.
Sunday, December 9, 2018
Saturday, December 1, 2018
Glen Falls
A backlit tree delights the
eye, but one fall leaf in gold or red, translucent with the sun from an angle
behind, makes a striking photograph. Light passes through the leaf as it passes
through a cellophane wrapper. The forest floor has become a carpet of gold, red
and brown as Glen Falls murmurs in the distance. Today, it is strange to think
that I wrote the poem, “Glen Falls Trail,” which cemented the persona of nature
poet for me, near the diminutive water fall from which I drew the title. That
was nearly twelve years ago, in 2007.
I call Glen Falls diminutive because I live in a land of waterfalls, with Lookout Mountain stretching south and west from my home in Chattanooga, Tennessee. Mountain is a misnomer, for it is a plateau eighty miles long and stretching across the corners of three states. The twin cities of Lookout Mountain, Tennessee and Lookout Mountain. Georgia occupy its northeast end and several villages dot the rest of its landscape. Several steams and one river originate atop the plateau and flow to the valley below. In the Georgia portion, a stream at Cloudland Canyon State Park flows over two falls visible from a hiking trail which descends limestone steps from the top.
Further south, in Alabama, the Little River descends DeSoto Falls at DeSoto State Park, named for the explorer whose party passed near by when Spain was the colonial power in the southern parts of what is now the United States. The Little River continues down the plateau to Little River Falls, where it enters the Little River Canyon, a gorge with high limestone cliffs on either side. It is a National Preserve. The name Little River is locally confusing. Another river with the same name flows through part of the Great Smoky Mountains, two hours to the Northeast.
I have visited and photographed these grander falls in autumn and winter when the flow is small and in spring when they become raging cataracts. By comparison, Glen Falls is a mere trickle, a gentle stream such as are found throughout the length of Lookout Mountain to the south, the Cumberland Plateau to the west, and the Appalachian Mountains to the east, all within a day’s drive. Each of those regions has a few thundering waterfalls and many smaller ones, the likes of Glen Falls.
When I wrote the poem, right here at Glen Falls, the leaves were just emerging from buds and the birds were still winter residents, awaiting the arrival of the river of warblers which flows through our forests in spring and fall. Spring wildflowers were still a hope in the heart.
The poem, “Glen Falls Trail,” began with a list of words, a writing prompt received at the open mic at a local bookstore. It also began with the murmur of the stream over the falls, and graffiti, “George Loves Lisa,” painted on a rock at the bluff above the falls. The poem ends with the lines:
“I never knew this George or Lisa
The rock bears their names in silence,
names the stream forgot years ago.”
There ended the poem, but not the story. I submitted the poem to a writing contest sponsored by the Tennessee Writers Alliance and later learned that I had won second place. I was invited to read the poem at an awards ceremony at the Southern Festival of Books that October, to take place 100 miles away in Nashville, the state capitol, on Legislative Plaza.
As summer progressed, I rehearsed the poem a few times and noticed I had less energy than before. Though only fifty-four years old, I thought my reduced energy a result of aging. Meanwhile, I took a job which proved to be more physically demanding and I noticed myself sleeping more hours each night. I thought it was just my body adjusting to the demands of the job, but in September my doctor performed a stress test and sent me to a cardiologist. The specialist performed an angiogram and declared that I would undergo Cardiac Bypass Surgery the following day.
I objected. It was a Thursday, and my awards ceremony was on a Saturday, just sixteen days away. More than that, I had been relatively healthy all my life and I could not adjust to the idea that I was not well. From the turning point of my successful poem I was at another of despair, thinking I might die during surgery or I might become an invalid.
Friday night and early Saturday I was in and out of consciousness like a failing florescent light on a marquee, the type which flickers to life, burns brightly for a while, and fades with an audible buzzing sound. By Saturday night I was in a private room, where I would remain for six more days. The mental adjustment after such a surgery is a whole other story.
After discharge from the hospital, I rested for three days at a friend’s house before returning to my apartment, where I kept everything within reach, not reaching over my head, and ate a healthier diet, but one which I consumed voraciously. My neighbor Julie spoke to me and agreed to drive me to Nashville for the awards ceremony, a promise she immediately regretted. She became convinced that I would die on the trip, but when Saturday arrived, we departed for Nashville with her friend Matt along for support. I slept most of the way, full of pain medicine and with the stress of a healing body.
At Legislative Plaza, the sun was bright and the crowd noisy. It was my first visit to a crowded urban area since the surgery, and I was in my own world. The canopy under which the ceremony would take place was surprisingly easy to find, though the ceremony was one of several simultaneous programs taking place on the plaza and in the surrounding buildings. I picked up a copy of the program for the festival, a document the size of a small tabloid newspaper, and noticed that a friend had given a reading the day before. Too bad I missed it.
I greeted the mistress of ceremonies, my poem in one hand and a heart shaped pillow in the other. I explained the importance of the pillow in helping me clear my lungs, speaking to her bemused countenance. The pillow was emblazoned with a lovely color schematic of a human heart, not of the valentine’s day ilk.
Fortunately, the emcee explained my journey to arrive at the ceremony before I stepped to the microphone. Though I did not bob and weave like an owlet, I was somewhat unsteady on my feet as I read what was in fact an early draft of the poem and not a copy of the submitted manuscript. According to my neighbor, I accelerated and slowed the pace of my reading in a random manner. I finished to the reluctant applause of an audience of strangers.
With my return to Chattanooga, my neighbor amazed I did not die on the trip, I spent more and more time on the porch, listening to the sweet sounds of chickadees and titmice. I wrote very little, but my inspiration from Glen Falls and survival of the trip to Nashville convinced me to continue as a poet.
I have since visited Glen Falls on numerous occasions and written two more poems there. I have discovered that I write best while outdoors and have published several poems. The poem “Glen Falls Trail” went on to be included in the Southern Poetry Anthology: Volume VI, Tennessee, an annual publication of the Texas Review Press. Each year, they publish a volume of poetry from one state, so most poets have but one chance to be included. Most of the poets are far better known than me and most have three poems in the volume in comparison to my one. I am honored to be included.
I call Glen Falls diminutive because I live in a land of waterfalls, with Lookout Mountain stretching south and west from my home in Chattanooga, Tennessee. Mountain is a misnomer, for it is a plateau eighty miles long and stretching across the corners of three states. The twin cities of Lookout Mountain, Tennessee and Lookout Mountain. Georgia occupy its northeast end and several villages dot the rest of its landscape. Several steams and one river originate atop the plateau and flow to the valley below. In the Georgia portion, a stream at Cloudland Canyon State Park flows over two falls visible from a hiking trail which descends limestone steps from the top.
Further south, in Alabama, the Little River descends DeSoto Falls at DeSoto State Park, named for the explorer whose party passed near by when Spain was the colonial power in the southern parts of what is now the United States. The Little River continues down the plateau to Little River Falls, where it enters the Little River Canyon, a gorge with high limestone cliffs on either side. It is a National Preserve. The name Little River is locally confusing. Another river with the same name flows through part of the Great Smoky Mountains, two hours to the Northeast.
I have visited and photographed these grander falls in autumn and winter when the flow is small and in spring when they become raging cataracts. By comparison, Glen Falls is a mere trickle, a gentle stream such as are found throughout the length of Lookout Mountain to the south, the Cumberland Plateau to the west, and the Appalachian Mountains to the east, all within a day’s drive. Each of those regions has a few thundering waterfalls and many smaller ones, the likes of Glen Falls.
When I wrote the poem, right here at Glen Falls, the leaves were just emerging from buds and the birds were still winter residents, awaiting the arrival of the river of warblers which flows through our forests in spring and fall. Spring wildflowers were still a hope in the heart.
The poem, “Glen Falls Trail,” began with a list of words, a writing prompt received at the open mic at a local bookstore. It also began with the murmur of the stream over the falls, and graffiti, “George Loves Lisa,” painted on a rock at the bluff above the falls. The poem ends with the lines:
“I never knew this George or Lisa
The rock bears their names in silence,
names the stream forgot years ago.”
There ended the poem, but not the story. I submitted the poem to a writing contest sponsored by the Tennessee Writers Alliance and later learned that I had won second place. I was invited to read the poem at an awards ceremony at the Southern Festival of Books that October, to take place 100 miles away in Nashville, the state capitol, on Legislative Plaza.
As summer progressed, I rehearsed the poem a few times and noticed I had less energy than before. Though only fifty-four years old, I thought my reduced energy a result of aging. Meanwhile, I took a job which proved to be more physically demanding and I noticed myself sleeping more hours each night. I thought it was just my body adjusting to the demands of the job, but in September my doctor performed a stress test and sent me to a cardiologist. The specialist performed an angiogram and declared that I would undergo Cardiac Bypass Surgery the following day.
I objected. It was a Thursday, and my awards ceremony was on a Saturday, just sixteen days away. More than that, I had been relatively healthy all my life and I could not adjust to the idea that I was not well. From the turning point of my successful poem I was at another of despair, thinking I might die during surgery or I might become an invalid.
Friday night and early Saturday I was in and out of consciousness like a failing florescent light on a marquee, the type which flickers to life, burns brightly for a while, and fades with an audible buzzing sound. By Saturday night I was in a private room, where I would remain for six more days. The mental adjustment after such a surgery is a whole other story.
After discharge from the hospital, I rested for three days at a friend’s house before returning to my apartment, where I kept everything within reach, not reaching over my head, and ate a healthier diet, but one which I consumed voraciously. My neighbor Julie spoke to me and agreed to drive me to Nashville for the awards ceremony, a promise she immediately regretted. She became convinced that I would die on the trip, but when Saturday arrived, we departed for Nashville with her friend Matt along for support. I slept most of the way, full of pain medicine and with the stress of a healing body.
At Legislative Plaza, the sun was bright and the crowd noisy. It was my first visit to a crowded urban area since the surgery, and I was in my own world. The canopy under which the ceremony would take place was surprisingly easy to find, though the ceremony was one of several simultaneous programs taking place on the plaza and in the surrounding buildings. I picked up a copy of the program for the festival, a document the size of a small tabloid newspaper, and noticed that a friend had given a reading the day before. Too bad I missed it.
I greeted the mistress of ceremonies, my poem in one hand and a heart shaped pillow in the other. I explained the importance of the pillow in helping me clear my lungs, speaking to her bemused countenance. The pillow was emblazoned with a lovely color schematic of a human heart, not of the valentine’s day ilk.
Fortunately, the emcee explained my journey to arrive at the ceremony before I stepped to the microphone. Though I did not bob and weave like an owlet, I was somewhat unsteady on my feet as I read what was in fact an early draft of the poem and not a copy of the submitted manuscript. According to my neighbor, I accelerated and slowed the pace of my reading in a random manner. I finished to the reluctant applause of an audience of strangers.
With my return to Chattanooga, my neighbor amazed I did not die on the trip, I spent more and more time on the porch, listening to the sweet sounds of chickadees and titmice. I wrote very little, but my inspiration from Glen Falls and survival of the trip to Nashville convinced me to continue as a poet.
I have since visited Glen Falls on numerous occasions and written two more poems there. I have discovered that I write best while outdoors and have published several poems. The poem “Glen Falls Trail” went on to be included in the Southern Poetry Anthology: Volume VI, Tennessee, an annual publication of the Texas Review Press. Each year, they publish a volume of poetry from one state, so most poets have but one chance to be included. Most of the poets are far better known than me and most have three poems in the volume in comparison to my one. I am honored to be included.
Wednesday, November 14, 2018
Book Signing at Star Line Books
Ray Zimmerman is pleased announce a book
signing for his new poetry and photography chap book Healing and Conflict:
Saturday, November 24
1 PM to 3 PM
Star Line Books
1467 Market Street, Suite 106
(423) 777-5629
This will be a second chance for those who
missed the book launch earlier this month.
More than half of the poems are previously
published in journals, including:
The Avocet
(Fountain Hills, AZ)
Number One
(Gallatin, TN)
Quill and
Parchment (Online)
Weatherings
Anthology (FutureCycle Press, Lexington, KY)
Terrence Chouinard of The Wing and the Wheel Press
contributed the perfect typography and design skills to this collection. The
local Chattanooga printing company Wonder Press did an excellent job with
production. The author will assume primary distribution at readings, signings
and open mic events. The book is locally written and locally printed.
Fellow poets had this to say about the advance
copy:
Ray
Zimmerman’s collection of poems Healing
and Conflict invites the reader outside: “go and watch/rain falling on
parched earth. /see it come back to life.” His words, like that rain, are
transformative to those who look and listen. Trees burn with ice, water
cascades, booming, against mountain hardwoods. Most memorable are the birds.
Warblers, hawks, barred owls, chickadees, and cranes provide this book’s
unifying motif, and a delightful surprise, when the reader joins a flock of
blackbirds in flight.
Marsha
Mathews,
Author
of Beauty Bound
“I have come to understand / that my poems are
not poems…but the poetics of the earth” (“Intro Part I”). Ray Zimmerman
explores nature through language and language through nature. With images and
similes like “The
winter snow arrived like a sonnet. / It reached the house in three waves, /
capped by a couplet of ice” (“Winter Snow”), the reader becomes immersed in Zimmerman’s
vivid landscape, both verbal and actual. Though he
claims, “My poems are shadows on the wall” (“Intro Part II”), Zimmerman’s words intrigue the reader as she delves into the subtext of these poems, and
they continue to haunt her long after the book is closed.
KB
Ballentine
Almost Everything, Almost Nothing
In “Introduction, Part II, Zimmerman says “If you enjoy
my poem about falling rain or about cranes in flight…go and watch rain falling
on parched earth…listen to cranes trumpeting as they take to the air.” In Healing, these
poems not only have a prayerful devotion to the natural world but use specific
names, images and Zimmerman’s hard-won humor from handling hawks, eagles and
owls. In Conflict, he reminds us of the massive plastic
islands humans have left floating in the oceans, of trends of certain species’
depletions. Yet, this chapbook is a celebration of birds, amphibians, reptiles
and mammals, of seasons and landscapes of planet earth, narrated with sensory
details and a deeply personal voice.
--Bill Brown, The
News Inside
Tuesday, November 13, 2018
Sunrise
Sunrise
November
11, 2016
The
morning sun gave light in brilliant bands of red, offset by cloud cover gray,
the sort of brilliant sunrise once attributed to air pollution. The air still
smelled of yesterday’s smoke, a thick haze of particles. I could smell the
smoke in my apartment, in my workplace, and anywhere I went outside. I was
frightened.
I
had heard about how the fire at Gatlinburg had invaded the city and burned a
thousand buildings, but that did not frighten me. Neither did the tales of all
the timber burned at Cohutta wilderness in North Georgia.
Health
alerts from local agencies warned those with heart disease, asthma, and other
conditions aggravated by poor air quality to stay indoors, run air conditioning
not at all. I have heart disease, asthma, and other conditions aggravated by
poor air quality. I was afraid I would breathe smoke until I gurgled my last
breath through congested bronchial tubes, unlike the pleasant sensation as my
exhalations once gurgled from the hose of a regulator as I observed shocking
neon green and blue fish at coral reefs near the Florida Keys.
This
dry October caped the hottest summer on record, with the driest October in 140
years, according to official figures. A
man from California said that this is no drought, not like it is out west, with
his state and several others dividing the water from the Colorado River. That
river becomes a dry stream bed by the time it reaches the Sea of Cortez.
This
year, our relative abundance of water is paltry. The parched leaves and twigs of
forests became a tinder box prepared for any spark. The land may lose its hair
at any turn.
Mountains
blaze in Georgia and East Tennessee. Gatlinburg suffered the worst but is not
alone. Campfires are strictly prohibited. Lightning struck at Cohutta
Wilderness. The area remains closed until further notice. Fires rage on Fox
Mountain and Signal Mountain, on Lookout Mountain, and at Cleveland, Tennessee.
More fires blaze in North Carolina.
Meanwhile,
there is good news from out West. Conservation groups bought some water rights
and left a little water in the Colorado. Water reached the Sea of Cortez and
recharged marshes and estuaries.
Here
in Tennessee, we hope for rain that the green earth may be restored.
Further reading:
We think of fire as a hazard to the natural world and
to ourselves, but some natural areas depend on fire for their continued
existence. In her book Braiding
Sweetgrass, Robin Wall Kimmerer address our relationship to nature. The
chapter “Burning the Headland,” specifically addresses beneficial aspects.
Question:
How do you feel when confronted with aspects of nature
that are beyond our control?
Friday, November 9, 2018
Eyeshine
February:
Eyeshine
A
warm winter night sent me down the road with car windows open. My body told my
mind that anything could happen. The mountain road was lonely enough to break
your heart … or fill it to overflowing.
The
green shine of an eye rose on the road, perhaps the eye of a deer. As I hit the
brakes a much smaller creature appeared. A fox ran off the road and into the
bushes below.
I
exited the car and walked to the side of the road, but the fox was gone. I
turned to walk back and glimpsed fur on the roadside. Three young foxes lay on
the berm. I could have tapped them with a toe but did not.
Instinct
told them, “don’t move if you want to live.” They lay as flat to the ground as
possible. Their eyes were paradoxically rolled up to the top of their heads,
fixed on me, the large predatory threat above. In this pose they looked as
though a cartoon artist had drawn them there, among the sparse roadside
vegetation in the light of a half moon.
Their
fur looked coarse with the guard hairs which protect wild creatures from briars
and catch snow, natures insulation for the body beneath. Under the guard hairs,
the short fur next to the body would be soft as a duckling’s down, warm to the
touch.
I
did not try to touch the three. Foxes can give a painful bite and are known to
carry disease, including rabies, but there was more to it than that. Seeing them
here in the light of a half moon was a rare gift of nature, whom I have called
my muse. I would intrude into their world no further.
Caught
up in the magic of that moment, I nearly jumped when a fast-moving shape cut
through the brush below; crashing through the woods as if it were a bear or a
human. When I looked back down, the three were gone, following an adult fox to
safety.
I
have since pondered that distraction. Foxes can move silently. Why did the
adult fox crash so noisily through the underbrush? It had to be an intentional
distraction. It got me to look away as the three escaped. I was sure that these
three would safely reach adulthood, though they certainly are gone by now, more
than twenty years later.
For
further reading:
Sally
Carrigher gave close views of wild creatures in her books, including One day at Beetle Rock, The Twilight Seas, One
day at Teton Marsh, and several others.
For
the Reader:
Describe
your own close encounter with a wild creature.
Sunday, November 4, 2018
Eye of the Beholder
I
rode in on the dirty dog, as they call the Greyhound bus, Ohio farm dirt still
in my hair. At least I had the sense to clean the cow shit off my boots.
Then
I briefly lost my luggage, or so I thought, standing there in the Port
Authority of New York. They could call me any name in the book, or even a few
that weren’t, but I was stubborn and would not get on that local to London,
Connecticut, until I saw my duffle bag stuffed into the compartment underneath
the bus.
Despite
reassurances that my luggage would catch up with me, I remained steadfast until
a man appeared driving the world’s smallest tractor. He pulled behind him a
string of small carts with my duffle bag standing up in the first one. He just
shook his head as he loaded it into the luggage compartment.
“Sit
up front, son,” the driver said. “There aren’t that many passengers on Sunday
Morning, not even at port authority. Keep your eyes peeled and I will show you
one of the sights not on the official tour.” With those words, he backed the
bus out and exited the bowels of that building through a grimy archway.
Born
onto that city street, I shielded my eyes from the light and looked to my
left. There they were, lined up as they
must often beat the precinct. Number
three, take one step forward and turn left.
The
driver turned his speaker system to public address and said, “Good morning,
ladies.” One of them smiled and waved, as the others glared. “They think I’m
bad for business,” he said.
They
were prettier than I would have expected, dressed in hot pants and leg warmers
with the temperature not twenty degrees out. Now that’s dedication.
Commentary
The
story is a performance piece, based on, but exaggerating actual events My
writings identify me as a person most at home in the woods, but I have come to
appreciate urban environments and realize that even the cityscapes are part of
nature, what is sometimes called the “built environment.” Trees grow out of
walls, nighthawks circle parking lots hunting insects, and migrating cranes
sometimes circle downtown Chattanooga on their way to Hiwassee Wildlife Refuge.
The book, Coming of Age at the End of
Nature, with introduction by Bill McKibben and including essays by members
of the millennial generation, addresses coming to peace with nature impacted by
human activity.
For
the Reader:
How
do you respond to urban environments?
Where
is wilderness in your world?
Do you see nature as
ending or enduring?
Monday, October 29, 2018
Bull Gator's Lament, with Introduction
Introduction
I am writing a series of blog posts
which may become a short book of daily meditations on the natural world. Some
of these entries began as short articles published in newsletters and
periodicals. Some began as performance pieces read or recited to live
audiences. In some cases, I learned the hard way how long is too long for a performance
piece. I also learned that the tolerance for lengthy pieces varies from one
audience to another in sometimes unpredictable ways.
Some
of the pieces were written as short essays and combined for submission to
journals as braided essays. Longer pieces are fine as essays, but do not work
well as orations, so I have unwound a few essays into component parts to create
the short meditations presented here and for use in performance art.
In
most cases I have included citations to places where the reader can find more
information. Use of these references is, of course, up to you, but I want your
experience of the pieces to be as much about you, the reader, as it is about
me, the author. I have also posed questions which you may view as a starting
point for your own meditation, an opportunity for rebuttal, or questions to be
ignored. A few people may view them as writing prompts. Posting them on my
blogs creates opportunities for reply.
Bull
’Gator’s Lament
What’s
that man lookin’ at, down here in this cypress swamp, so thick with branches
that the sun barely gets through? He’s lookin’ at me, Old Bull ’Gator, and I’m
lookin’ at him. Why don’t you come on
over for dinner?
Speaking
of dinner, you should have been here when I grabbed that turtle from his sunny
spot over there by the water hyacinths. When I broke through to meat, those
tourists thought a rifle shot had gone off. Fish, man, bird, or turtle, I get my
dinner.
Sometimes,
man eats us though. He’ll come down to this swamp and put a bullet in a
’gator’s brain. Those poachers don’t waste any time. They skin the ’gator out
right here and cut up the tail meat for Cajun delight. The hide gets made into
boots.
The
poachers never got me though. Bigger ’gators missed their chance too. I had to
be careful when I was young, because we've been known to eat our own. But now, I’m
king of this here swamp.
Springtime
is my favorite time of year, with Spanish Moss fluttering in the breeze, like
curtains in an old mansion house. That’s when I get to bellowing. My bellows
echo off the cypress trunks and all through the swamp. Those lady ’gator’s
bellow right back. When one of them judges Old Bull fit, we spin like two demons
in a whirlpool.
Pretty
soon, she will be building a nest out of mud and sticks. When the eggs hatch
that fierce old momma ’gator hears those young’uns grunting She gently pulls
the nest apart and tenderly frees the baby ’gators. That’s when she won’t want
Old Bull around, because we’ve been known to eat our own.
Maybe
I’ll just wonder off and watch those fishing boats go by. Perhaps one of them
will flip over. Man, fish bird or turtle, I get my dinner.
Look
over yonder at those little ’gators sunning themselves on their momma’s snout.
I believe one of them is a baby bull. He will have to grow some before he can
be king of my swamp.
Commentary:
Bull
’Gator’s Lament is a performance piece, generally well received by the
audience. It was once much longer and is now shortened to a length that works
better. I will continue to refine it as I present it at more venues. It is of
course, pure fantasy. For a factual look an alligator’s habitat, read Everglades, River of Grass by Marjory
Stoneman Douglass
For
the Reader:
Though
nature is sometimes portrayed in the cuddly realm of soft bunny rabbits and
downy goslings, predation is a day to day reality. Some animals are downright
frightening.
How
to you perceive the natural world?
Is
it a resource for the creation of wealth through extraction of such materials
as timber and coal?
Is
it a wilderness to be protected, or perhaps tamed?
Is
it a place of solace and healing?
Is it a frightening
place?
Thursday, March 9, 2017
Chattanooga
Writers Chat
Thursday, March
30
6 to 7 PM
Star Line Books
1467 Market
Street # 106
Chattanooga,
Tennessee
Chattanooga
Writers Chat is an encouragement group in which area writers can gather to
discuss resources available to writers to develop their craft and promote their
work. For the month of March, we will discuss the book Bird by Bird: Some
Instructions on Writing and Life by Anne Lamott. Participants are advised to
obtain and read a copy before attending. Ray Zimmerman will lead the
discussion. Ray has produced, promoted, and hosted numerous events in the
Chattanooga region.
What people are
saying about Bird by Bird
“A warm,
generous, and hilarious guide through the writer’s world and its treacherous
swamps.”
- Los Angeles
Times
“Superb writing
advice...hilarious, helpful and provocative.” - New York Times Book Review
“A gift to all
of us mortals who write or ever wanted to write...sidesplittingly funny,
patiently wise and alternatively cranky and kind - a reveille to get off our
duffs and start writing now, while we still can.
- Seattle Times
An Excerpt from
the Book:
“Thirty years
ago my older brother, who was ten years old at the time, was trying to get a
report on birds written that he’d had three months to write. We were out at our
family cabin in Bolinas, and he was at the kitchen table close to tears,
surrounded by binder paper and pencils, and unopened books on birds,
immobilized by the bigness of the task ahead. Then my father sat down beside
him, put his arm around my brother’s shoulder, and said, ‘bird by bird, buddy.
Just take it bird by bird.’”
Tuesday, February 7, 2017
We Are Water
Dry weather this year
Color fades on dying
trees
We are water
I am excited to announce
that my new book, We are Water, is in the final stages of production.
I review the final draft at the printer tomorrow, and hope the print run will
be complete next week.
This book is a very small
product, featuring haiku and color photographs. The photograph and matching
haiku appear on facing pages, and the poems are inspired by the nature
photographs. In technical terms, they are ekphrastic.
Initial production will
be a short run, due to the cost of color printing, and the book will be
available from the author and through a local book store. Five of
my poem/photograph combinations are also available as post cards at Star
Line Books in Chattanooga. I am looking into an ebook version of We are
Water, but the unique size and shape may make electronic publishing
difficult.
I began looking at my
photographs (originally shot on 35 mm slide film and digitized more recently)
and writing matching haiku after reading The Art of Haiku by Stephen
Addiss. I also had the opportunity to participate in a church art show with my
poetry last summer. I produced a poster of a longer poem and a poster of
one of my photographs as companion pieces. I have since produced four
poetry posters (also known as broadsides), with signed and numbered copies
available at Star Line Books and from the author.
I am also pleased to
announce that the writers book club I organized had its first meeting on
February 2nd and will meet again at Star Line Books, on Thursday,
March 30th at 6:00 PM, We will discuss Anne Lamott’s book, Bird
by Bird, an excellent resource for writers wishing to develop their craft.
www.rayzimmermanauthor.com
Wednesday, March 9, 2016
Publication News
I just received news that two of my free verse poems will appear in the Spring issue of The Avocet, which will be out in late April. I also have a haiban in the current issue of The Weekly Avocet. Haiban are an interesting form, beginning with a prose passage and ending with a haiku. I find it surprising that I have just published a haiban while my previous posting on Goodreads author's blog included information about Narrow Road to the Interior, the work in which Matsuo Basho (1644 to 1694) formalized and popularized this form. Selections from Narrow Road to the Interior appear in collections of essays as well as collections of poetry.
I just received news that two of my free verse poems will appear in the Spring issue of The Avocet, which will be out in late April. I also have a haiban in the current issue of The Weekly Avocet. Haiban are an interesting form, beginning with a prose passage and ending with a haiku. I find it surprising that I have just published a haiban while my previous posting on Goodreads author's blog included information about Narrow Road to the Interior, the work in which Matsuo Basho (1644 to 1694) formalized and popularized this form. Selections from Narrow Road to the Interior appear in collections of essays as well as collections of poetry.
Thursday, February 11, 2016
Monday, February 8, 2016
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Any posting on this Facebook page is solely my own, weather it be an opinion piece or a report of facts uncovered by editorial research. No posting represents my employer, my church, or any civic or nonprofit group of which I am a member, officer, director, or volunteer. The same is true of postings on my webpage at rayzimmerman.weebly.com, my blog atrayzimmerman.blogspot.com. google+ postings, and my book review pages on www.goodreads.com and www.amazon.com, as well as any postings on group pages on Facebook. Facebook postings on Fan Pages of organizations are solely developed to promote interest in said organizations and may not necessarily represent the opinion of those groups.
Sunday, January 31, 2016
I wrote this piece several years ago (early 1990's) for The Art of Living. Thanks to Finn Bille, editor and publisher for using my work.
Owls of Springtime
I stand in
a patch of moonlight opened by the fall of a live oak that grew in the too soft
soil of the island. The moon is pale in comparison to its cousin the sun, so
the opening is bathed in shadowy half-light.
Human eyes
adjust remarkably well to this pale luminescence. My trained eye picks out the
individual branches of the live oaks and red maples; even the Spanish moss
draped over the branches is revealed in the moonlight.
Night
vision is clear but fades to shades of gray, like a black and white photograph.
The night world is one of sharpness and clarity, but without color.
Beyond the
island stretches the water and cypress world of Okefenokee swamp. Maps tell me
that this water world has boundaries, but my senses tell a different story. My
eyes and ears tell me that I could get in a canoe and travel forever, and at
the end of that journey the swamp would go on.
In early
March the cypress are already green with new growth. The maples are in bloom
with their particular red flowers and the light barely penetrates to the water.
American poet James Weldon Johnson used a land much like this as an analogy for
the darkness present before the creation of the sun. He referred to that time
as “…blacker than a hundred midnights
down in a cypress swamp.”
Out on the
swamp no movement is discernable. No bull gators bellow their amorous
intentions this late in the spring. No heron is spooked from its roost with
such hoarse squawking to make me believe that the ghosts of nearby Billy’s Island have come to life.
I step back
from the clearing, keenly aware of the incomparable alertness of the nighttime
creatures. The wondering raccoon needs no flashlight to find the remnants of
our evening meal. The owls in the treetop have seen and heard our small party
before we even think of looking for them. How many times have I cursed a
missing tent stake, despite my good night vision, only to find it beside my
tent in the morning, not four inches from the wooden stake I cut from my
firewood as a substitute? An owl has no trouble seeing the mouse it searches
out for dinner. A fox has no trouble following the trail of a bob white or a
rabbit. Humans alone seem limited in their sensory abilities at this time of
day.
The sense
that I most associate with nighttime though is hearing. The crickets chirp, the
tree frogs trill and the pig frogs grunt. I cup my hands beside my open mouth
and softly hoot into the darkness. So my mentor did before me and so his before
him. With a low call at first, I imitate the eight syllable call of the barred
owl. As I increase the volume, an owl answers in the distance, and then
another. The woods are home to a nesting pair, defending their territory from
me, the intruder.
Owls are
made that way. They will not tolerate any strangers wandering into their
territory. The island has just enough mice, voles, and cotton rats to support
them and one year’s progeny. The hoot of an intruder is a query of a traveler
looking for a home. The answer is the equivalent of “scram.”
Later that
night I awaken. Something has stirred the owls in the 3:00 AM darkness. Always vigilant, the pair
defends their island home.
Thursday, January 28, 2016
Rain
Published in The Weekly Avocet
Published in The Weekly Avocet
Like a love poem that fills the heart to
overflowing
rain covers the mountain just after the
New Year.
Murmuring rivulets dampen once dry
leaves,
intersect paths and muddy trails,
muddy shoes and trouser legs.
I plunge through fecund mud and leaves,
become a mud man devoted to sylvan gods.
Glen Falls becomes a roaring torrent,
deceives my ears.
Thinking it close, I forge ahead.
The cascade below the fallsa booming
choir.
Bases and contraltos reverberate from
hickory and oak.
I bow before the splendor,
prepare to endure cold days ahead,
anticipate Equinox rebirth.
Friday, December 4, 2015
Found this in an old notebook.
Taurus
Ray
Zimmerman
Taurus,
bull of heaven,
Zodiac
constellation,
lies
on the ecliptic.
Ishtar
released the bull.
It
was vengeance against Gilgamesh
who
refused her affections.
The bull scorched the earth.
Gilgamesh
said “Let us go
and
kill this bull of heaven.”
Enkidu,
his friend, demurred.
“Let
us not kill this bull of heaven,”
yet
they destroyed the bull.
The
land regained its strength.
Ishtar
asked her father for revenge.
They
have killed the bull of heaven!
Gilgamesh,
half divine, was spared.
Mortal
Enkidu died, lay in state for seven days.
Saturday, November 14, 2015
Flash fiction International
Reviewed by Ray Zimmerman
I
usually compare the novel to a mammal, be it wild as a tiger or tame as a cow;
the short story to a bird or a fish; the microstory to an insect (iridescent in
the best cases). - Louisa
Valenzuela
Luisa Valenuzeula’s statement has a
certain charm as she compares the very short fiction form, now known as flash
fiction, to iridescent insects, but I prefer to liken them to gems, lustrous
with beauty and hard as the truths they reveal. The editors of Flash Fiction International selected
eighty-six of the best of the best stories in this form. The editors included
stories from locations as diverse as The United States, Iraq, Bangladesh,
Argentina and Zimbabwe.
A review of all eighty-six stories is not
possible, but a sampling serves to illustrate the diversity of voices in this
collection drawn from world wide sources:
In “The Waterfall,” Alberto Chimal of
Mexico describes a ritual which combines christening and baptism, in which the
drops of consecrated water are likened to the souls of the dead, each hoping
that his (or her) name will be preserved, that their name will be the one given
to the young child. Will the selected
name be Guglielmo, Terencio, Jason, Emil, or some other
In “Prisoner of War,” by Mune Fadhill of
Iraq, a man returns home after eighteen years in an Iranian prison to see his
now deceased wife’s likeness in the face of a grown daughter. He withdraws into
his own world of repairing technology. He is changed and the world around him is
changed.
In “Eating Bone” by Shabian Nadiya of
Bangladesh describes a wife threated with divorce after ten years of a
childless marriage. She asserts herself in a surprising way. Meanwhile, Natalie
Diaz of the United States portrays a legless veteran who takes to his
wheelchair and cruises the dancefloor of “The Injun Who Could,” intoxicated
female tourists.
Although many of the stories are new
works by contemporary writers, some very short classics have made their way
into this collection. “The Young Widow,” by the Roman author Petronius joins “Appointment
in Samarra” (W. Sommerset Maugham) and “An Imperial Message” (Franz Kaufka).
These brief narratives range from one to
three pages, and each is a complete story in itself. This collection is as bright
as a star field on a dark winter night.
Saturday, October 17, 2015
MUSIC AND STORYTELLING FOR ALL AGES
November 7 & 8
Cloudland Canyon State Park
Ray Zimmerman Master of Ceremonies
For information on other aspects of this event see http://mountainartsandcraftcelebration.com/... or https://www.facebook.com/FOCCSP
Saturday - November 7
ê 10:35 to 11:35 (Music) No Till
Drillers
ê 12:00 to 1:00 (Music) Scarlett
Stitch
ê 1:30 to 1:55 Amber Lanier Nagel
ê 2:00 to 2:25 Finn Bille
ê 2:45 to 3:45 (Music) Rising Fawn
Social Club
Sunday - November 8
ê 10:00 to 11:00 (Music) Brian Henry
ê 11:15 to 12:15 (Music) Scarlett
Stitch
ê 12:45 to 1:10 Ray Zimmerman
ê 1:15 to 1:40 Michael Gray
ê 2:15 to 3:00 (Music) Jerome Arnold
ê 3:30 to 4:30 (Music) Organized Kaos
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